The total score of my evaluation is out of 20 points. I gave 5 points if the student stayed on point of his or her narrative story and managed to k eep a narrative stand point. I also gave 10 points if the students length was of over 200 words and penalized a point for every 15 points and student was below 200 words. I also gave 5 points for structure and how enjoyable the story was.

I gave him 5 out of 5 points for he stayed on focus with his narrartion throughout the whole story.

He got 10 out of 10 points for the length was proper.

He also received 5 out of 5 for his story was well structured and and very enjoyable.

He got a total score of 20/20 points.