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John's narrative process was refreshingly unique in the class. I enjoyed it the first time and even more the second. The final revision reads more fluidly. His use of cyberstyle and linkage really adds to it as well. Good shizzle.

original narrative - 15 points

John's remixes were excellent. For me it demonstrates the need for a writer to step back from his content and appreciate that mannar in which it is conveyed. Very creative.

remixes - 5 points

Grand Total - 20 points